Monday, July 14, 2014

Blog Errors and Corrections (for the test)


­Blog Errors: Please look at the following sentences taken from our introductions on the blog. Each sentence contains at least one predominant error. See if you can identify it/them.

Please study the corrections for the test


1.     As you know, Wuhan is a city which has many lakes and rivers, thus I could swim in them when I was very young.


2.     I am ***** form China. I was born in Jiangsu. Since my father is fond of playing football, I am also a football fan.


3.     (I am) Looking forward to studying with you (in) the following weeks!


4.     A lot of my friends work in computer and network companies.


5.     Sometimes I camp in a forest surrounded by unbroken, magnificent mountains. Sometimes I stroll on a street in a small town by myself and gaze the setting sun in the end of the vista. Sometimes I just do nothing but sit at the table tasting the great dishes served by local residents. Run-on sentence problem
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6.     Though sometimes affected by fog, it’s beautiful (and tidy) during clear days.


7.     I am a little bit shy before strangers, but if we become friends, i am sure that i can be more outgoing and talkactive.


8.     If you have an opportunity to visit Osaka, please try to eat it.  I think you like it.


9.     My hobby is playing basketball and watching series,so I am really pleasure to share some interesting things about basketball or soap opera with you guys.


1 0 One picture I took of the port of my hometown during the sunrise.

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