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Errors: Please look at the following sentences taken from our blog posts about
‘things we like in California’. Each sentence contains at least one predominant
error. See if you can identify it/them and make corrections. What does the
writer need to do next time?
Especially
when you go into a shop and immediately someone asks you, how you are and how
he or she can help you.
In
Japan I've been suffered from humid, hot weather and continuous rainy days in
summer.
But
I saw something special when we came to presents opening.
One
thing that I really love is the weather here in California. Because in Taiwan,
it's always humid and overwhelmingly hot.
Also,
because of the heavy air pollution, I often get coughed or some other
respiratory diseases.
The
most I like here is the enthusiasm of people here.
Sometimes
there could be some embarrassing circumstances made by oversea travelers
because of culture shock,for instance,people from Asian and European countries
may not know the fahrenheit degrees when talking about temperature and may
cause some embarrassing condition,but American people are always willing to
help you get out of the stuck circumstance by telling some relevant jokes or
showing their comprehension to you.
For
instance, to welcome the summer's coming, some brands will make some
attractive plans to celebrate summer's coming and entice people to buy their
newest summer apparel.
However,
my English skill is not enough to speak whatever I want to say, so I have to
improve the skill because I want to talk with her more fluently.
Good
weather do make people feel happy and the cozy weather here make it more
comfortable for people to stay outside!
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